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I can hardly call this an animation. It's more like you put a webcomic frame for frame into a movie. That's not necessarily a bad thing, but this didn't really work out well. It doesn't have to be superfluidly animated, but even some basic animation would've made it a lot more entertaining to watch. The drawings and the voice acting were decent, but sometimes a bit hard to understand because of the toned down voices. It certainly needs some work, but the idea has potential.

It's pretty decent. I see some influences from Family Guy, am I right? The animation is a little inconsistent, try going for either an animated or an 8-bit look. Now you've combined them and that doesn't always look that nice. Also try switches camera perspectives a little more, to make the scenes a little more lively.

But even though the animation isn't really good, I pretty much enjoyed watching this because of the little jokes. Last complaint: the tempo is a little low, could be faster. But it's a pretty nice cartoon, keep it up!

Giddens responds:

Thanks for the review. I appreciate you taking the time to jot some stuff down. The next episode will be out next Friday and from that episode on the animation becomes more consistent. I hope you'll check it out.

His gun switches from left to right arm all the time. Not sure if this is supposed to happen. Same goes for the bird i the Doctor's head. Apart from that, the animation is fluid (although obviously tweened). It's clear you've done a lot of work for this.

Hey, I see you're using a cover of a song from Rayman Origins (great game). The animation isn't really wrong, the movements are pretty fluid. But it's not a very entertaining video. Aside from her singing, there is no comical value, tense situation or story of any kind. Try working on that next time.

Nice animation! I really liked the grandma with the shotgun. The over-the-top-humor goes well with the "childish" art style and the story is entertaining. Certainly an improvement over the first episode! Voice-acting could use a little more variation though (Muck and Rag sound pretty similar). But anyway, good job!

animationsteve responds:

Thanks very much for watching BurgerToons! :) I'm glad you like Muck and Rag. There will be a halloween special soon, so be on the look out ;) Or add me so u can get the update.

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