Animation and camera movement in the action sequences was surprisingly good! Shame you went for such a cliché plot though.
Animation and camera movement in the action sequences was surprisingly good! Shame you went for such a cliché plot though.
I didn't have that much time to think about everything. Considering we are only given 25 days to make an entry and I had to do another animation before and only did it within 15 days.
It's pretty decent. I see some influences from Family Guy, am I right? The animation is a little inconsistent, try going for either an animated or an 8-bit look. Now you've combined them and that doesn't always look that nice. Also try switches camera perspectives a little more, to make the scenes a little more lively.
But even though the animation isn't really good, I pretty much enjoyed watching this because of the little jokes. Last complaint: the tempo is a little low, could be faster. But it's a pretty nice cartoon, keep it up!
Thanks for the review. I appreciate you taking the time to jot some stuff down. The next episode will be out next Friday and from that episode on the animation becomes more consistent. I hope you'll check it out.
Nice animation! I really liked the grandma with the shotgun. The over-the-top-humor goes well with the "childish" art style and the story is entertaining. Certainly an improvement over the first episode! Voice-acting could use a little more variation though (Muck and Rag sound pretty similar). But anyway, good job!
Thanks very much for watching BurgerToons! :) I'm glad you like Muck and Rag. There will be a halloween special soon, so be on the look out ;) Or add me so u can get the update.
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